Wednesday, August 16, 2006

A Page!

Any suggestions please, please let me know.


Blogger Jamar said...

I like:

- The rounded-edged panels. NICE

- The character - CUTE!

- The little doods as a footer - CUTER!

I donnalikeasomuch:

- The white-out stars. Try hitting the board with white paint splattered through a thumbed-thru toothbrush. SPRRRRITZ! They look lumpy in some places.

- The little doods as a footer - they're a little too close to the art - bring it down some maybe, or give some variation of their colors - white/black/white/toned/ etc. It's a little too flat and 'white', considering this is a space adventure.

- The font - Don't ever call me again if you keep using COMICSANS. There's people that would throw rocks at your house for that. Do it by hand, since your art is so organic, or try a free spot like Stay away from comicsans, girl.

LOVE IT! Keep going!

5:28 PM  
Blogger Jamar said...

Wait - I think I realized that you did the stars in PSHOP. That's cool - just mess with the pressure and give it some variation.

But what do I know!

5:32 PM  
Blogger Alina Chau said...

That's a great page!! I especially love those funny little characters at the bottom!

8:20 PM  
Blogger Echo said...

Daugh!! There's nothing left for me to say ):o
and buckle up:)

9:33 PM  
Blogger Bonaia said...

I apologize to all future rock throwers for using such a horrific font. hehehehe... i tried downloading a font and i'm not sure exactly how to install it into my computer.

11:02 PM  
Blogger Mike M said...

Nice page! I agree with what Jamar said...and you should hand letter.

10:26 AM  

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